don't be so hard on yourself, video looked good! it was a decent length, not too short, and not ridiculously long, and as badmts said, no crappy music, no wind noise, the vehicle was in frame...
though i would edit out the first 23 seconds, and the last 10... other than that, nice work!
the wheeling wasn't super weak either... you were 3 wheelin in it... that's pretty decent!